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On the ground in New York City it was 36 degrees Fahrenheit. Where Grant was standing, with his toes over the edge of a 51st floor apartment, shoes crunching in the broken glass of the shattered floor to ceiling windows, it was much colder. The wind whistled through the empty spaces around him. He pulled up the collar on his black military jacket, huffed warm air over his chin, and looked down into the remains of what used to be Times Square. Or maybe it still was. Just because one civilization had left it behind didn’t mean that its characteristics would change until some other group came along and made it their own. It was going to be a while before the plants took the cities over so completely from neglect.

It would be the plants. The people of Earth had tried, no one else was coming.

And because Grant lived the kind of life that could never, ever depend on his conjecture, someone chose that exact moment to enter the apartment, tripping his makeshift alarm and causing an unholy racket along with ruining his poetic train of thought. “For the love of all that’s holy,” he said, turning around. “Can’t anyone ever, oh, it’s you.”

Nell was caught in a shadow box, the dark door frame she was standing in surrounded her as the golden doors of the elevator across the hall behind her caused her silhouette to pop in the near dark. She was wearing a grey peacoat and black pants, and had a semi-automatic rifle trained on him. He slowly pulled his hands from his pockets and spread his arms outward like broken wings.

“I killed you,” she said.

“You tried. It was a commendable effort, since I not only had to recover from the bullets, but also from the infection and dry socket I got when you removed my three gold teeth.” Out of habit, he ran his tongue over the empty spaces where his back left molars had been.

“I needed proof. It was that or your hand.” She stepped forward, lifting her foot over the spent trip wire.

“That doesn’t make any sense,” he said. “You can’t prove the teeth were mine, but fingerprints are unique. I wouldn’t need a hand if I was dead. Why the sudden swell of sympathy for the nearly dispatched?”

Nell lowered her gun and threw the strap over her shoulder. “I’m soft on ya, Gee, always have been.”

Grant relaxed, dropped his arms, and took a few steps toward the center of the room. It was for safety, just in case she decided to rush him and fling him from the window. “Always were a crazy bitch,” he said.

“You know any sane people in our line of work?”

“Touche.”

“You got anything to drink?” she said. “I’ve damn near climbed a million stairs to find you. My lips are chapped to bleeding and my throat feels like I’ve swallowed the oysters, shell and all.”

“No water. I’ve been rationing a bottle of top shelf whiskey for a week now.”

“That’ll do.”

He could feel Nell’s eyes on him as he crossed the room to the small apartment kitchen. Grant turned his back on her to pull the whiskey bottle from the over-the-stove cabinet. He poured the makeshift water into the bottle’s cap and turned to hand it to her.

“Didn’t these people have any real glasses?”

“Rationing means small sips.”

“Selfish prick.” She upended the cap in her mouth and hummed low in her throat as she swallowed. “That hurts all the way down.”

“Being selfish is one of my charms. Another one is that I’m not shooting you in the head right now. I’m a gentleman that way.”

“You wouldn’t expend the energy without an order and pay upfront.”

“For you I might make an exception, one of these days.”

Nell held out the cap and smiled, stretching the skin tight over her chin and cheek bones. He remembered her as a beauty with a glow in her eyes. The last time he saw her she had been fuller in the cheeks and chest, her dark hair flowing around her shoulders instead of cropped to above her ears. Living was treating her worse than death ever would, but that didn’t quell the urge to run his knife across her tan, ropey throat.

“More,” she said.

Grant nodded and poured again, and again, and again. She took shot after shot and tossed them back like she was trying to extinguish the flame in her gut. He thought about how vulnerable he felt with his toes sticking out into the air. He’d spent an hour that way every day, just contemplating jumping, but not being able to.

He was afraid death wouldn’t take him. He was afraid Nell would. He was afraid of the morning light. He was afraid of his next job, which was the only one of the four that he could successfully hide from, as long as he had a stable supply of forgotten booze to claim.

The last drop dribbled into the cap and Nell had to practically lick it out with her white, dehydrated tongue. “What else have you got for me?”

“I think there’s a mini bar on the next floor up,” he said. “A cavalry line of cheap vodka just waiting to be taken.”

“So let’s walk the plank.” She tossed the cap toward the open window and frowned when it fell just short of it.

“Let’s, mate,” he said. He moved past her, then spun around and snatched the rifle from her shoulder. Before she could grab for it he brought the butt of the gun up into her nose and knocked her out cold across the once-white carpet, now grey with mildew. She had been right about not being worth the energy, but that didn’t mean he didn’t always catch exactly what he was after.

This post was written in response to [livejournal.com profile] therealljidol Exhibit A, Week Two Topic: Throw back the little ones. Concrit and comments are welcome.

Date: 2013-01-30 06:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] halfshellvenus.livejournal.com
Interesting setting here, and I like the sparring between the two characters.

I can't tell if Grant is also an assassin, but it doesn't really matter. When someone is always waiting to kill you, you're always forced to try to get the upper hand!

Date: 2013-01-30 04:02 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] momebie.livejournal.com
Grant has been an assassin. He's currently between occupations. Thank you. ♥
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Date: 2013-01-30 04:05 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] momebie.livejournal.com
Oh man, believe me, I know alcohol is no way to hydrate. Grant knows that too, but he's much better off than Nell at this point, and he wasn't about to offer her the supplies he would need for later. And you're right, there's not much left to find that has kept.

Date: 2013-01-30 11:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alien-writings.livejournal.com
Oh, this was cool! I liked the interactions between the two characters, and I liked your setting. I wondered about what exactly Grant was; you made me curious. :)

Date: 2013-01-30 04:07 pm (UTC)
ext_289215: (WS Bucky/Tasha)
From: [identity profile] momebie.livejournal.com
Grant also wonders what he is, at this point. ;) Thank you!

Date: 2013-01-30 07:52 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] jenny_evergreen
"And because Grant lived the kind of life that could never, ever depend on his conjecture,"

That was an EPIC line. Excellent story.

Date: 2013-01-30 08:16 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] momebie.livejournal.com
Haha, thank you. I thought about cutting that, but I liked what it said about Grant enough to keep it in. ♥

Date: 2013-01-30 08:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] audreybuttercup.livejournal.com
Loved it! I will say that at the end when he said "Let's, mate" I missed the comma there and thought...well you know...

Date: 2013-01-30 08:19 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] momebie.livejournal.com
I like to think he was also counting on her to miss the comma a bit. Or to take it however she liked it, which she'd do anyway.

Thanks!

Date: 2013-01-30 11:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] theun4givables.livejournal.com
Oh, I definitely liked Grant and Neil's interaction, here. There was a lot of rich background to go off of here -- and you bogged the readers down with NONE of it. It was all very well integrated in with the current story. Well done. :)

Date: 2013-01-31 02:09 pm (UTC)
ext_289215: (WS Bucky Watch)
From: [identity profile] momebie.livejournal.com
Thank you! The interactions between people are always my favorite bits to write.

Date: 2013-01-31 05:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kandigurl.livejournal.com
Oh man, I love this! I kept waiting for them to make out. ;)

Date: 2013-01-31 02:09 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] momebie.livejournal.com
BEST COMMENT AWARD. I feel like my job here is done. :p

Date: 2013-02-01 04:06 pm (UTC)
ext_289215: (X-Men Charles/Erik gun play)
From: [identity profile] momebie.livejournal.com
I am seriously amused at people wanting them to make out. That is the reaction I usually have when people are being hostile. JUST SHUT UP AND KISS ALREADY. It works out better in some movies than others. :p

Date: 2013-01-31 08:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] comedychick.livejournal.com
I really like your use of the prompt, and the world you've created here has me wanting to know more. :D

Date: 2013-01-31 02:10 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] momebie.livejournal.com
Thanks, hon! I think this slots in with the other parts of the BDESFN universe, even though they're new characters. I might play around with them a bit and see if I can't make them fix some of my problems with it.

Date: 2013-02-01 02:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] comedychick.livejournal.com
Oh, awesome! You know I love that universe. :D

Date: 2013-01-31 03:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] darkmachines.livejournal.com
I'm into it! I like Grant, that I do. He's a smartie, I can see it.

Ace work, the words, as usual, are perfect.

Date: 2013-01-31 06:47 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] momebie.livejournal.com
Thanks much, madame! I honestly have no idea where Grant came from or where he's going, but I think I'm going to enjoy figuring it out and slotting him into the BDESFN stuff.

Date: 2013-02-01 12:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] myrna-bird.livejournal.com
I really liked the dialogue and the unexpected turn a round. I Hope you get prompts that fit more action for these characters!

Date: 2013-02-01 04:08 pm (UTC)
ext_289215: (Sherlock Jim Welp)
From: [identity profile] momebie.livejournal.com
Thank you! As much as I don't want to try and do serial stuff this time around, because of the short season and because I feel like the Mattie and Or stuff went off the rails last time, I wouldn't mind working with them some more. Or at least Grant. He's a new character to me and I'd like to run him through some paces I think. I'll have to see what prompts we get!

Date: 2013-02-01 02:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] n3m3sis43.livejournal.com
Ooh, this was interesting. I got the feeling this is a world you've been playing in for a while, but at the same time I thought it stood pretty well on its own because the character interactions made up for any gaps the reader had in knowledge about their world and situations. I'm definitely interested in knowing more. :D

Date: 2013-02-01 04:11 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] momebie.livejournal.com
I have kind of retroactively fitted it to a world, if that makes sense? The characters are entirely new to me, so I was trying to find a place for them and I have a universe they'd slot into quite neatly that I think might need some new perspectives, so they'll be good for that.

But thank you!

Date: 2013-02-02 02:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jem0000000.livejournal.com
I liked this -- particularly the setting and the dialog. :)

Date: 2013-02-05 06:06 pm (UTC)
ext_289215: (Default)
From: [identity profile] momebie.livejournal.com
Thank you! Dialogue bits are always my favorites.

Date: 2013-02-02 02:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] oneonthefence.livejournal.com
I always feel a connection to your writing - it is real, and I somehow have this odd sense that I've been there. The realism is wonderful. And I definitely have my questions about Grant. :)

Date: 2013-02-05 06:06 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] momebie.livejournal.com
I might print this comment out and post it on my wall, fair warning. ♥

Date: 2013-02-05 07:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] oneonthefence.livejournal.com
Warning received. Go for it. :) <3

Date: 2013-02-02 04:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] witches.livejournal.com
This is awesome :D

Date: 2013-02-05 06:06 pm (UTC)

Date: 2013-02-02 07:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ohelectricshock.livejournal.com
This was very cool, and I loved the banter between the two characters.

Date: 2013-02-05 06:07 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] momebie.livejournal.com
I'm really glad that all came through, thank you.

Date: 2013-02-03 04:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jensi08.livejournal.com
Great flow!! I loved the banter between them and just how it was written. :)

Date: 2013-02-05 06:07 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] momebie.livejournal.com
Thank you so much.

Date: 2013-02-03 04:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] baxaphobia.livejournal.com
I liked the interaction between the 2 characters. I was pulling for grant! Grin

Date: 2013-02-05 06:08 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] momebie.livejournal.com
Grant needs somebody to pull for him! He feels too tired to do it for himself these days. Thank you.

Date: 2013-02-03 07:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lilycobalt.livejournal.com
I got a sense of a lot of history between the characters. How many times have they killed each other, bantered about it afterwards, and killed each other again?

Date: 2013-02-05 06:08 pm (UTC)
ext_289215: (WS Bucky Watch)
From: [identity profile] momebie.livejournal.com
I'd have to sit down and figure it out, but I think I'd put the tally at three attempted on her end, and one maiming on his. ;) Thank you.

Date: 2013-02-04 02:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] phoenixejc.livejournal.com
Definitely leaves me wanting to know what happens next!

Date: 2013-02-05 06:09 pm (UTC)
ext_289215: (Bucky Barnes Well)
From: [identity profile] momebie.livejournal.com
That makes two of us. :p Thank you.

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