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Original fiction.
~1100 words.


For those of you following along, I've finally named The Waiter. We're calling him Maynard. This follows closely after my last LJ Idol entry, which can be found here.

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Maynard ran his finger across Mattie's collarbone, pausing over the small, round tattoo just below it. The touch tickled. She squirmed, pulling away slightly, and he took it as an invitation. His lips followed the line as his fingers pushed the strap of her bra down her shoulder. Mattie wasn't sure what she was feeling, but none of those feelings were sexy. Or needed. Or wanted. She just kept thinking about Or and her heavily lidded eyes and light skin.

“Mayn,” she said, and placed a hand flat against his chest.

Maynard stopped and pulled back. He propped himself up on his elbow and looked down at her. One of his fingers traced its way down her side, as if he was afraid to let her go. “Yeah?”

“I'm sorry, I just.”

“No, it's fine. It's fine.” He leaned in and kissed her on the nose. “I know I don't glow for you. I'm just trying to be the perfect distraction.” He nipped at her chin and she laughed, pushing him over as she sat up.

“It's not like I glow for you either.” She straightened her bra strap and sighed. “What are we doing?”

“Killing time,” he said. “Slow and easy.”

“Just the way it was meant to die,” she said.

“Is there something eating at you, Mattie my girl? You seem farther away this evening.”

“Nothing.” She sighed and flopped back on her pillow. “Everything. You weren't far off when you asked if I'd seen a ghost. I have. I've been seeing it for a week now, here and there. It won't leave me be.”

“Is there anything for it?”

“Not really. I've been...censoring myself since I was very young. Things happen sometimes that I don't know how to deal with, so I lose them. I make the decision to cast them to sea so I'm not weighed down by them.”

“Except they're never really gone, are they?”

“No, not really. I pretend I'm fine for long periods of time, until something floats to the surface and reminds me of who I used to be.”

“That sounds lonely,” he said.

“Sometimes loneliness is just a part of surviving.”

Maynard opened his mouth to answer, but anything he might have said was drowned out by a pounding on the door. “What the hell?” he said finally.

Mattie shrugged and tumbled out of bed, finding her balance as she went. There was more pounding as she made her way through the kitchen. “All right already!” She opened the door with the chain on, giving her two inches of space to investigate.

Or was on the other side. She placed her face right against the crack. “Let me in,” she said. “You have to let me in.”

Mattie didn't think she had to do anything, but Or seemed to be legitimately startled, which threw her. She closed the door, undid the chain, and then opened it again. Or rushed in and slammed the door shut behind her, redoing the chain and throwing the deadbolt.

When Mattie turned around Maynard was in the living room. “What is going on here?”

Or turned to look at him. Mattie was suddenly aware that neither of them was wearing very much. Or raised an eyebrow, but she didn't bring attention to what she may have interrupted. Instead she pulled off her red gloves and shucked her black pea coat, dropping her things onto Mattie's couch. “I'm sorry for the interruption, but I seem to have gotten into a spot of trouble.”

“Okay,” Maynard said slowly. He ran his hand through his hair and and looked helplessly at Mattie for a moment before returning to the bedroom.

Mattie stood in the center of the living room, her arms wrapped around her waist, and waited for an explanation. Or huddled on the edge of the the couch and looked Mattie up and down. The corner of her mouth turned up and Mattie suddenly felt warm.

Maynard returned then, and chucked a shirt at Mattie. “Right,” he said. “Who are you, and what's this about?”

Or waited until Mattie was clothed again before answering. “I'm being tracked,” she said.

“Tracked? You mean followed.”

“No, tracked. Like an animal. I'm sure they mean to kill me eventually as well.”

“What the hell,” Mattie said, echoing Maynard. “What have you done?”

“I haven't done anything, yet. But those fuckers are going to get theirs when I get to the bottom of all of this.”

“The bottom of what?” Maynard flipped his hand in Or's direction. “Mattie, what is going on?”

“I don't know,” she said. Because she didn't. To Or she said, “how did you find my apartment?”

“The same way I find everything. Research, Mattie, research. Please keep up, because I don't want to die tonight.”

“No one is going to die here,” Maynard said. “I'm going to turn the light on. All of us standing here in the dark is ridiculous.”

“No!” Or leaped up from the couch and grabbed his wrist. “No, don't. I don't want you to draw any attention here. Not until I can find out who it is exactly that I'm dealing with. Does either of you have a computer?”

“Yeah,” Mattie said. “In here.” She led Or through to the bedroom and turned on the old desktop machine. “I barely use the thing.”

Or sat down in the desk chair and then looked back at Mattie over her shoulder. “I find that hard to believe,” she said.

“Why?”

“Why do you have one of the Diviner's Marks tattooed on your chest?”

“That's not—”

“It most definitely is my business. Especially now that they're trying to kill me.”

"Why would the Diviner's be trying to kill you?"

Instead of answering Or slapped the side of the computer, which was being slow to start. “Come on!”

Out in the living room Mattie heard glass break. “What the hell?” she said again, her voice tighter in her throat this time. It seemed to be the only response she could muster to the mad alternate universe she'd just been dropped in. Before she could make it out of the room Maynard trundled in and collapsed against her. She swayed under his weight. It took a moment for the wetness between them to register. His shirt was wet. She pushed him away and saw that there was a dark, rapidly growing stain on the front of his shirt.

When she looked down she saw that the front of her shirt was now wet as well. The stain looked dark purple in the bluish glow from the computer screen. Maynard stumbled backwards onto the bed and passed out.

Mattie screamed.


This bit of fiction was written for Topic 18: Jetsam at [livejournal.com profile] therealljidol. Thank you to [livejournal.com profile] paragraphs for helping me name The Waiter. All comments and questions are welcome.

Date: 2011-03-22 02:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sopdetly.livejournal.com
AHHHH. MOARRRRRRR. WAAAAAAAAAAANT.

You are really not helping my desire to write a serial fic. *shakes you*

Date: 2011-03-22 01:57 pm (UTC)
ext_289215: (Doctor Who Eleven arms open)
From: [identity profile] momebie.livejournal.com
SERIAL FIC FOR EVERYONE. I totes encourage you to do that. And, you know, one day I'll get to reading the one off you posted and stop feeling bad about encouraging you to do things when I'm going to continue being behind on life. Just, you know. I'm excited about your brain!

I'm not sure how serial this will stay. I really need to sit down and look at the plot. And if I'm going to take it and turn it into something 'real' then it's going to need better writing. But I'm having fun with the mystery of it for now!

Date: 2011-03-22 02:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sopdetly.livejournal.com
For mine, I'd really have to plan it out and get it mostly written before I could start posting it, and I get the feeling right now you're more off the cuff. Having LJI to push you to post must be a nice help. :)

Ehh, I've been behind on life more times than not and I haven't always been the best fic-commenter, so I am giving of much slack. My fic isn't going anywhere! *hugs*

Date: 2011-03-22 03:13 pm (UTC)
ext_289215: (A:TLA Zuko Unimpressed)
From: [identity profile] momebie.livejournal.com
This one is off the cuff, which is why I'm feeling like I'm not keeping up with it. I've never really written a story like this before. I've had experience doing off the cuff RP type stories, but this is a whole new ball of wax. It's also pretty much unlike anything else I've ever written. So it's an interesting experiment, but I think if I was going to do it again I would definitely do more planning and start writing before I got into posting things. But yeah, one of the reasons I'm trying to keep up with LJI is that it is forcing me to post. I'm going to have to try and keep this momentum when I'm kicked out. Possibly to work on things I SHOULD have been working on all along. *shifty eyes*

Date: 2011-03-22 02:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] seratonation.livejournal.com
omg! so this just got exciting!

i hope the next prompt means we could find out more of whats happening to Or. and oh man i think im falling for mattie.

also also i hope you didnt just kill off maynard D:

Date: 2011-03-22 01:58 pm (UTC)
ext_289215: (MCR Gerard/Frank Not Okay kiss)
From: [identity profile] momebie.livejournal.com
I HOPE THE NEXT PROMPT MEANS THAT TOO. This bit changed quite a lot from what I was GOING to post, because I had to get the jetsam stuff in. So we'll see. Maybe I'll get better about folding things into an already established structure. That would be a nice skill to learn.

But I'm super glad you like Mattie. ♥ Thank you, hon.

Date: 2011-03-22 04:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] comedychick.livejournal.com
Oh no! I really want to find out what Or has got herself into. This is really exciting stuff and I'm glad you're continuing it every week now!

Date: 2011-03-22 05:42 pm (UTC)
ext_289215: (Bleach Szyael Insanity yay!)
From: [identity profile] momebie.livejournal.com
SO MUCH EXCITEMENT. Now I just need to sit down and figure out where it's going! Weeee!

Date: 2011-03-22 05:53 am (UTC)
admiral: gwendolyn → odin sphere (『dr mccoy』→ ❝ star trek ❞)
From: [personal profile] admiral
Noooo, cliffhanger! Enough with those! Maynard better not be dead, I was starting to like him.

Date: 2011-03-22 05:43 pm (UTC)
ext_289215: (A:TLA Sokka OMFG)
From: [identity profile] momebie.livejournal.com
He is not dead yet! The whole reason I gave him a name was so I could torture him further and REALLY ENJOY IT. So. He'll be around and in pain for a while. :p

Date: 2011-03-23 05:45 am (UTC)
admiral: gwendolyn → odin sphere (『helga sinclair』→ ❝ atlantis ❞)
From: [personal profile] admiral
Good! I mean, at least I think that's good.

Date: 2011-03-22 01:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xsnarkasaurus.livejournal.com
dfakjldkfjalsdkfj O___________O

MORE! NEED MORE! ~massages KL's brain to coax out more~

Date: 2011-03-22 05:43 pm (UTC)
ext_289215: (MCR Gerard/Frank Hug)
From: [identity profile] momebie.livejournal.com
My brain really could use a massage. Man. Thinking is hard. *collapses on you*

Date: 2011-03-23 01:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xsnarkasaurus.livejournal.com
Thinking *is* hard. ~massages brain more~

Date: 2011-03-22 02:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] darkmachines.livejournal.com
i'm def enjoying this! i liked it a lot. I like Or's way of speaking. The part where she was saying KEEP UP made me snicker. I like her attitude.

The little conversation that was happening in the beginning seemed really natural though. I think you did well :D

Date: 2011-03-22 05:45 pm (UTC)
ext_289215: (Angel Sanctuary setsuna torn)
From: [identity profile] momebie.livejournal.com
She is not very patient with people who are not ALREADY ON THE TRAIN. She tends to forget that not everyone knows the details. Which, really, she should be more patient because she's kind of the one who's just derailed Mattie's life. And it's only going to get worse. Alas.

Thank you muchly, ma'am. I'm really going to have to suss this out before I go any further. Or it's going to get away from me.

Date: 2011-03-23 01:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] darkmachines.livejournal.com
i think you'll do a good job of reining it in!

Date: 2011-03-22 07:28 pm (UTC)
shadowwolf13: (Default)
From: [personal profile] shadowwolf13
Oh! Very nice! I was really pulled into this and I'm looking forward to reading more.

Date: 2011-03-23 04:47 pm (UTC)
ext_289215: (MCR Frank Hm.)
From: [identity profile] momebie.livejournal.com
Thank you. I'm glad it's keeping you interested.

Date: 2011-03-22 10:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ecosopher.livejournal.com
Oh dear. Poor Maynard. I was waiting for some kind of badness to befall him :/

Looking forward to next time - I'm interested in what Or will find on the computer.

Date: 2011-03-23 04:48 pm (UTC)
ext_289215: (Default)
From: [identity profile] momebie.livejournal.com
HE IS IN FOR MORE BADNESS. Because it's just how I roll. ♥ Thank you!

Date: 2011-03-23 04:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pixiebelle.livejournal.com
You're really talented with the fiction. I'm slightly jealous. Okay, more than just slightly.

Nicely done!

Date: 2011-03-23 04:49 pm (UTC)
ext_289215: (Batman Pow)
From: [identity profile] momebie.livejournal.com
Thank you, hon. Not that you're so bad at this writing thing yourself. *bro punches you on the shoulder*

Date: 2011-03-23 05:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] i-17bingo.livejournal.com
Maynard is probably the least sexy name I can think of, and that's probably why he works so well (I find myself visualizing Rory from the current series of Doctor Who)

As a whole, you never fail to wow me with your clever manipulation of verbiage and pacing.

Date: 2011-03-23 05:14 pm (UTC)
ext_289215: (Doctor Who Eleven worse than everybody's)
From: [identity profile] momebie.livejournal.com
Ha yeah, I haven't been very kind to the guy from the start, have I? Honestly, Maynard was the first name suggested that didn't remind me of someone I knew. (It made me think of Boneshaker and Tool.) But I am totally okay with it being unsexy. And I love Rory. ♥

Thank you. That's very kind of you.

Date: 2011-03-23 06:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] basric.livejournal.com
Great next chapter, the tension buildings, explodes. What's next? I'm impatient.

Date: 2011-03-23 06:42 pm (UTC)
ext_289215: (Default)
From: [identity profile] momebie.livejournal.com
Next there is some running. And possibly some more shooting. And some homestyle first aid to gun wounds. Just your average Saturday night in the future!

Thank you!

Date: 2011-03-23 07:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] myrna-bird.livejournal.com
I want to know more about the significance and power of the tattoos. This story is progressing right along. Open ended...waiting for more.

Date: 2011-03-25 01:19 pm (UTC)
ext_289215: (Bleach Renji tattoos)
From: [identity profile] momebie.livejournal.com
I'm working on the tattoos. I can tell you that I think Mattie got hers because of her run in and knowledge of the Old Man, who is actually the reason that Or is in town snooping around. Or doesn't know it's a tribute, though, so she's very distrustful of it and sees it as something that aligns her with the Diviner's.

Date: 2011-03-25 08:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] myrna-bird.livejournal.com
Thanks for the preview! It will be interesting, for sure!

Date: 2011-03-24 08:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lawchicky.livejournal.com
Great installment. I'm enjoying this story.

Date: 2011-03-25 01:19 pm (UTC)
ext_289215: (Default)
From: [identity profile] momebie.livejournal.com
Thank you muchly, madame!

Date: 2011-03-25 11:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mstrobel.livejournal.com
Cliffhanger of doom! Exciting stuff :D

Date: 2011-03-25 01:19 pm (UTC)
ext_289215: (Yellow gun)
From: [identity profile] momebie.livejournal.com
DOOOOOM. He's not dead yet! Thank you.

Date: 2011-03-26 02:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] m-malcontent.livejournal.com
Fabulous, enjoying the agony!

Date: 2011-03-27 01:56 pm (UTC)
ext_289215: (Default)
From: [identity profile] momebie.livejournal.com
Excellent! I love a good bit of agony myself. Thank you.

Date: 2011-03-26 04:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lady-ganesh.livejournal.com
Oooh, I love it! You're making the world so much deeper.

Date: 2011-03-27 01:57 pm (UTC)
ext_289215: (Bleach Ulquiorra sword)
From: [identity profile] momebie.livejournal.com
I'm trying to see how far down it goes! Thank you.

Date: 2011-03-26 09:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] locknkey.livejournal.com
fascinating - lots of show. it really pulled me in.

Date: 2011-03-27 01:57 pm (UTC)
ext_289215: (Default)
From: [identity profile] momebie.livejournal.com
I'm glad you liked it. Thank you.

Date: 2011-03-26 11:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] joeymichaels.livejournal.com
I am totally impressed with you brave few LJI folks who have chosen to do serial fiction. That you do it well impresses me even more. :D

Date: 2011-03-27 01:58 pm (UTC)
ext_289215: (Default)
From: [identity profile] momebie.livejournal.com
I have never done serial fiction of any sort before, so this has been an interesting experiment. I'm glad to have you along for the ride. Thank you.

Date: 2011-03-26 05:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] imafarmgirl.livejournal.com
Great use of the prompt and making it fit your storyline.

Date: 2011-03-27 01:58 pm (UTC)
ext_289215: (Default)
From: [identity profile] momebie.livejournal.com
Thank you muchly, madame!

Date: 2011-03-26 06:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] snarkerdoodle.livejournal.com
GAH! I *hate* cliffhangers!

(by which I really mean 'omg loved this MOAR NAO PLEZ' and so on, lol.)

Date: 2011-03-27 01:59 pm (UTC)
ext_289215: (Default)
From: [identity profile] momebie.livejournal.com
Ahahaha. I feel the same way about them. Thank you!

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