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momebie ([personal profile] momebie) wrote2011-03-28 09:08 pm
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Little you know. Little you care.

Original fiction.
906 words.


If you're keeping track, this bit of story follows directly after my last LJ Idol post.

. . .

Or was out of her chair the moment Mattie started screaming and had her hand clamped tight across Mattie's mouth in a matter of seconds. “Hush,” she said, letting the final shh sound linger. “Breathe. We can't help him if we lose our heads, and that will only get the rest of us into deep shit.”

Mattie nodded her head and swallowed down another shout. She was shaking, she realized. When Or released her she said, “is he dead?”

Or moved around the bed. She placed her fingertips to the side of his neck and leaned over his half open lips. Then she moved down and pushed his shirt up his chest. “I need you to go into my jacket and get the the metal cylinder.”

“Is it safe?”

“No,” Or said. “Nothing is safe anymore.” When Mattie hesitated she said “he will die if we don't do something. Go.”

Mattie dropped to her knees and crawled across the living room below the sight line of the bare windows. She pulled Or's jacket off the back of the couch and rummaged around in both outside pockets before checking the one inside the lapel. The metal cylinder in question was about the size of a magic marker. It was cold and smooth. She clutched it in her palm as she crawled back to the bedroom.

Or held her hand out and Mattie placed the cylinder into it. Mattie watched as she flicked one end around like she was unscrewing a cap, and then shook the thing several times. She passed it over Maynard's wound. The glow was dim at first, and Mattie was sure her eyes were playing tricks on her, but it grew stronger, and as it did a picture formed in the space above Maynard's body. It flipped and flickered, like it was at the bottom of a pool of water.

“Mirror imaging retinal activated guise elector,” Or muttered. “I tell it what I want to see and it maps and recreates the image using phosphorescent and electro-luminescent nanotech. The MIRAGE software is still being developed, but it's good enough for a bullet wound. Do you have any tweezers?”

“I-” Mattie tried to understand what Or had said, but decided it would be best to leave the epiphanies for non-life or death situations. “Yeah, yeah.” By the time she returned with them Or had used one of her pillowcases to clear up some of the blood and was manipulating the picture above Maynard's body with her hands. Mattie handed Or the tweezers.

Maynard inhaled deeply and choked. He had a coughing fit that made his whole body jump.

“Hold him,” Or said.

Mattie nodded and sat down on the bed next to Maynard. She rested her hands on his shoulders. “Hey, hey,” she said. “I'm here. You're going to be okay.” She pressed one of the pillowcases into his hand. “Squeeze this.”

“It hurts,” he said, and coughed again.

“Tell him to stop moving or I'm going to remove parts of his appendix instead of this bullet,” Or snapped. Maynard groaned and shut his eyes, but he held still. When she had the bullet she said, “the hole's relatively small. We should be okay if you have some gauze and a way to hold it down. Clean it with alcohol if you have any.”

“I might have some alcohol,” Mattie said. “Where are you going?”

Or was back at the computer desk, wiping the bullet down with some tissue and running her magic metal wand over it. “Look,” she said. “If we want to get out of here any time soon he needs to be fixed and we need to know where to go. I'm taking care of one of those things already.”

Maynard pushed against Mattie's hands until she let him sit up. “I can handle the clean up, I think,” he said. “Have to make up for that unmanly display.”

Or turned to look at him. “You might be okay, Waiter Boy.”

“How do you know I'm a waiter?” he said.

“You wear it well,” she said, and then turned back to her device.

Maynard looked at Mattie, who shrugged and took the bloody pillowcase out of his hand. “Your vodka's in the freezer, yeah Mat?”

“Yeah,” she said.

Maynard stood up and pulled his shirt over his head, wincing as he stretched. He left the room and Mattie waited until she could hear him banging around in the kitchen before she spoke again. “Know where we're going yet?”

“Hm,” Or said.

Mattie slid off the bed and went to hover behind Or in her desk chair. She was holding a small, yellow piece of paper in her fingers. The bullet and metal wand were set to the side of the keyboard. “What is that?”

“A prayer.”

Mattie felt her stomach turn over. “The bullet was blessed? They can't just shoot people anymore, they have to apply some apocryphal force to it all?”

“Not quite,” Or said. “It's a prayer of freedom. Whoever made this bullet, at least, wants to be set free. It's likely that we weren't the intended targets.”

“That doesn't make any sense.”

“You haven't seen Not Making Sense yet, kid.”


This continuation of ridiculous fiction was written for Topic 19: Mirage at [livejournal.com profile] therealljidol. All comments and questions are welcome.

[identity profile] seratonation.livejournal.com 2011-03-29 03:19 am (UTC)(link)
:D:D:D so you gave Or a variation of the sonic screwdriver? but damn it! every story gives more questions than answers.

in other words *________* i love how the world growing :D
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[identity profile] momebie.livejournal.com 2011-03-29 12:11 pm (UTC)(link)
Ha. It is kind of like a sonic screwdriver, isn't it? It doesn't do as much. It mostly contains the nanotech and the wand is used as a reverberation thingamajigger to program the nanotech. Oh yes, I'm getting technical up in this bitch. Thingamajigger. :p

Thank you.
admiral: gwendolyn → odin sphere (『altair & ezio』→ ❝ assassin's creed ❞)

[personal profile] admiral 2011-03-29 04:55 am (UTC)(link)
Whoo, not dead!

MIRAGE is an impressive acronym, I always have trouble thinking of ones that are more than three letters. xD
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[identity profile] momebie.livejournal.com 2011-03-29 12:13 pm (UTC)(link)
No one's allowed to die yet! There's more shooting and shit that needs to happen! (And I'm not certain it works as an acronym, but don't tell anyone. Shhhh.)
admiral: gwendolyn → odin sphere (『dante』→ ❝ devil may cry ❞)

[personal profile] admiral 2011-03-29 09:10 pm (UTC)(link)
Prolonging the angst is always the best option. (psh, if it fits all the letters, it counts as a good acronym.)

[identity profile] comedychick.livejournal.com 2011-03-29 05:25 am (UTC)(link)
This made me smile. I just love the world you're creating here!
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[identity profile] momebie.livejournal.com 2011-03-29 12:13 pm (UTC)(link)
I will take any and all smiles. ♥ Thank you!
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[personal profile] shadowwolf13 2011-03-29 04:52 pm (UTC)(link)
More story and more questions. Very cool little device there. :D
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[identity profile] momebie.livejournal.com 2011-03-30 12:29 am (UTC)(link)
I hope to answer any and all questions! And thank you!

[identity profile] myrna-bird.livejournal.com 2011-03-29 10:57 pm (UTC)(link)
MORE smiles and I love the acronym. Very creative way to fit the topic into your story!
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[identity profile] momebie.livejournal.com 2011-03-30 12:30 am (UTC)(link)
When in doubt, make up technology. I'm not working on that science fiction thing for nothing! *nods* Thank you.

[identity profile] i-17bingo.livejournal.com 2011-03-30 05:03 pm (UTC)(link)
You have to count yourself lucky that the prompt wasn't "A Walk Through the Red Light District in Amsterdam with Arnold Schwarzenegger"; that would be one hell of an acronym.

P.S. Still loving this...
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[identity profile] momebie.livejournal.com 2011-03-30 07:05 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm glad it wasn't, but now I'm thinking of all the things I could do with that prompt. The final product would have to have a Philip K. Dick sort of flair. *nods*

Thank you.
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[personal profile] yachiru 2011-03-30 05:51 pm (UTC)(link)
I keep wondering if you're ever gonna write something I don't like. Nope. It's all awesome.
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[identity profile] momebie.livejournal.com 2011-03-30 07:11 pm (UTC)(link)
I've got a secret check sheet of things you like. *nods* BUT THANK YOU.
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[personal profile] yachiru 2011-03-30 07:43 pm (UTC)(link)
I'll be waiting for the hardcore werewolf slash then. >_> Just slip it under my door and no one gets hurt.
ext_289215: (Ouran Tamaki/Kyouya pinky swear)

[identity profile] momebie.livejournal.com 2011-04-01 07:52 pm (UTC)(link)
I wouldn't tempt me. I mean, I am kind of lost down the Les Miserables hole at the moment, but I did spend a LONG time in Harry Potter writing Remus/Sirius pretty exclusively.

[identity profile] basric.livejournal.com 2011-04-01 04:21 am (UTC)(link)
And so it continues and very well may I say.
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[identity profile] momebie.livejournal.com 2011-04-01 01:55 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you. :)

[identity profile] mstrobel.livejournal.com 2011-04-01 12:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Mmm, that gripped me so nicely :D
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[identity profile] momebie.livejournal.com 2011-04-01 01:55 pm (UTC)(link)
Sorry! Sometimes my fiction gets handsy. You've got to give it boundaries early on. :p

[identity profile] lawchicky.livejournal.com 2011-04-01 05:19 pm (UTC)(link)
This was great and I loved the last line.
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[identity profile] momebie.livejournal.com 2011-04-01 07:51 pm (UTC)(link)
You make me glad I deleted the stuff that was after it at the last minute. :p Thank you.

[identity profile] joeymichaels.livejournal.com 2011-04-01 09:54 pm (UTC)(link)
Heh. I am dyslexic and sometimes my brain reads what it wants to read instead of what is on my screen, so that last sentence said "You haven't seen Stop Making Sense (http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0088178/) yet, kid."

That, then got me thinking of The Talking Heads, which led me to think of the song "Life During Wartime" (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DblvhECdws0) which, while not really directly connected to your entry, seemed like an interesting little connection anyways.

Anyhow, I'm enjoying this story and am looking forward to the next part!
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[identity profile] momebie.livejournal.com 2011-04-02 06:43 pm (UTC)(link)
It's true! I haven't seen Stop Making Sense yet! I also don't think I've ever heard this Talking Heads song, so now I'm just sitting here grooving to it.

Thank you much, sir! *gets down*

[identity profile] snarkerdoodle.livejournal.com 2011-04-02 10:03 pm (UTC)(link)
Any story with vodka in the freezer is a-okay in my book. lol. ;)