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i'm def enjoying this! i liked it a lot. I like Or's way of speaking. The part where she was saying KEEP UP made me snicker. I like her attitude.
The little conversation that was happening in the beginning seemed really natural though. I think you did well :D
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The little conversation that was happening in the beginning seemed really natural though. I think you did well :D