ext_5359 ([identity profile] bone-fauna.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] momebie 2007-01-25 12:55 pm (UTC)

who has a thing for tough blondes.
<- Dude, badly. XD

OMG YAY, so totally wasn't expecting this so soon, but maybe that's cause I'm too use to my own habit of taking 10,000 years to finish things in ^_^

So many little things I liked about this.
The verbal-sparring and tension at the beginning between Havoc and Roy.

He stood for a moment and looked at Roy expectantly. His smile widened, Roy's frown deepened and he turned back to his papers.
-> For some reason, i just really like this sentence. Maes/Roy love-hate. Tickles me the right way ^_^

It was more of a breath than a word, and it carried with it all the force of a leaf falling from a tree.
-> Gorgeously poetic <3

Mustang snapping at Jean that Maes is just on a date, but Jean pointing out that no one can hate Hughes. Awesome :D

Oh dude. Oh DUDE. Maes walking in on them. HOLY HELL. And I felt like jumping up and wanting to defend Havoc's honour when he was likened to cheap vodka, but hey, i guess we all have our favourite's, and Havoc just doesn't quite cut it for this Roy when compared to Hughes I suppose. So i'm here to offer my services to take Havoc off Roy's hands >:D

I mean... YAY FOR FIC. *hugs* ^_^

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