ext_7690 (
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2006-02-12 11:43 am (UTC)
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Just one little crit?
The past tense of the verb 'to drag' is '
dragged
' not 'drug'. 'Drug(s) are an entirely different matter. :)
Otherwise this was just lovely.
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The past tense of the verb 'to drag' is 'dragged' not 'drug'. 'Drug(s) are an entirely different matter. :)
Otherwise this was just lovely.